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Subject: can you top this dirge? Author: medeis [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 19:56:15 05/06/01 Sun ok, thought i would try my hand at something really depressing...a dirge (not a poem). feel free to hop on board and post your own depressing dirges! LOL! happy flowers yellow sunny twisted, dry stems crackling gilded smiling dewdrops dusted with parched grimaces heads nodding slowly falling in the bleak stillness tiny petals trembling into rage unfolding, shaking blue water shimmer shy folding into barren ravines teasing come-close turn-away song shriveled in upon itself frivolous froth swirling over dread secrets unspoken tiny shells tumble into salted wounds shrieking in the greenery fire flushes, ash sifts lifts to dunes branches reaching high stands petrified, bleached once willowy bending these monuments of the leveling tiny shimmering leaves reduced to elemental unity skipping child laughing runs to an equalizing silence flickering instants in forgotten places, the lone legacy a red handprint in the cave, a single footprint in the mud a legion of forms marching to this crush of aeons (what a bunch of rubbish...LOL! ;P) [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date not rubbish, wonderful writing! *claps in amazement!* storm 14:13:24 05/07/01 Mon dirge drivel, but thanks! LOL! (NT) -- medeis, 14:55:06 05/07/01 Mon