| Subject: Re: ~Caught Up In The Fast Lane~ *story* |
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Date Posted: 14:43:43 03/01/02 Fri
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's message, "Re: ~Caught Up In The Fast Lane~ *story*" on 14:24:46 03/01/02 Fri
This first part is kinda adult material. lol So if you gon trip don't read it, but believe me it's not that bad or that deep. lol
~2 months later in the middle of the night Dawn and Cornell were in their bedroom having sex when Dawn saw a shadow move across the room. She started to tense up and get as close to Cornell as she could by wrapping her legs around him.~
Cornell: Damn, I know you ain't cuming already. ~looking at her face~ What's wrong?
~Just then they heard a gun cock and Cornell felt a gun being held to his head.~
MV: Get the fuck up nigga!
~Cornell didn't move. (He couldn't. Dawn still had her legs around him. lol) The lights came on. A tall black nigga was standing next to their bed and another one was by the door. Dawn let out a little scream.~
Man #1: Bitch, I said get the fuck up.
Cornell: What the fuck is going on dirty?
Man #2: Nelly we meet again.
Dawn: Nell what's going on?
Cornell: Aww shit! Boo let go.
Dawn: No Cornell! You're not going anywhere.
Cornell: Baby you gon have to let go. Please.
~Dawn moves her legs~
Man #2: That's right Nelly. Da D is back and I want my muthafucking money.
Cornell: I don't have it… ~getting up and putting on some boxers and jeans~
Man #1: What the fuck you mean you don't have it? ~hitting him in the stomach~
Dawn: ~screaming~ Cornell! Stop it please!
Cornell: ~bending over and coughing~ I ain't got it here.
Dawn: What the hell is going on? What are they talking about? Cornell!
Cornell: Baby don't worry. ~putting on a shirt, hat, and jacket~
D: Hurry the fuck up. We ain't got all damn night!
~JJ walked in and D pointed his gun at him.~
Dawn: No! Don't!
JJ: Mommy, too loud.
Dawn: Okay. We're sorry. Go back to your room and stay there. ~JJ leaves~ Gotdamn Cornell! I thought you were through with this shit. ~crying~
Cornell: Boo I am. Don't worry.
Dawn: I have to worry. Baby I'm pregnant.
Cornell: Pregnant? What?
D: Cut this bullshit or I blow her and you!
Dawn: Cornell…
Cornell: I'll be back. Promise.
~Cornell left and Dawn went to JJ's room.~
Dawn: Hey boo. Why don't you come sleep with me tonite?
JJ: Okay Mommy. ~gets up and grabs Dawn's hand~ Where's Daddy?
Dawn: He had to go out. Now hop in.
~Jay got in and they fell asleep. Cornell came home a few hours later and got in bed. When Jay woke up Dawn was gone and Cornell was laying next him.~
JJ: Daddy. Daddy wake up.
Cornell: What?
JJ: I hungry.
Cornell: Ask Dawn to make you sumthin.
JJ: But Mommy not here. So get up. ~jumping on him~
Cornell: But I don't want to.
JJ: Daddy! ~whining~
Cornell: Jajuan! ~mocking him~
~Cornell opened one eye, looked at his son's angry face, and started to laugh.~
Cornell: Aight, aight. I'm up. Lets go downstairs.
~They go downstairs to the kitchen and see a note on the table.~
Nell,
Last night scared the hell out of me. I can't take that again. I think it's time we left New York. I went to see my mother. I'll be back later. Luv you.
~Dawn~
Cornell: Jay guess what?
JJ: What? ~interested~
Cornell: We're moving.
JJ: Huh? ~looking confused~
Cornell: ~laughing~ We going to live by Tee Tee Traci and Uncle Zane and Auntee T and Uncle Silkk.
JJ: Yea! ~jumping up and down~
Cornell: Thought you'd like that. Now we have to tell Mommy.
Dawn: ~walking in~ You just did.
Cornell: So what do you think?
Dawn: I think that's for the best.
Cornell: You sure?
Dawn: My son had a gun pointed at him I damn sure don't want that to happen again.
Cornell: Don't worry boo. We'll get out of here and that'll never happen again. ~wrapping his arms around her~ You know I love you ri? ~kissing her cheek~
Dawn: I know and I love you too.
Cornell: And don't forget that. So why ain't you tell me you was pregnant earlier?
Dawn: It was never the right time.
Cornell: Well, that sure as hell was a time to tell me.
Dawn: Sowwy! It just came out. ~laughing~ I'm bout to go call Teena and Traci.
Cornell: That's why our phone bill so damn high now. Yo ass always on the phone with them two. Y'all act like y'all still live in the same city.
Dawn: Shut up! ~lhao and walking upstairs~
~She got upstairs, went into her bedroom, and dialed Traci's #~
MV: Hello.
Dawn: Hey Vion. It's Aunt Dee. Is your mom home?
Tayvion: Hi Aunt Dee! Yep, Mommy's right here. Hold on.
Traci: Hello.
Dawn: Hey chica.
Traci: Hi chick. Wuz up?
Dawn: Click over and call T and I'll tell y'all both at the same time.
Traci: Aight. Hold on.
~She clicks over and calls Teena~
FV: Hello. Man, hold on. Dyamond! Sit the fuck down!
Dawn: Damn girl. Can we say harsh?
Teena: You just don't know. VoShonne ain't here and these kids are urking the hell out of me. Man, hold on again. ~ a few later~ Aight I'm back.
Traci: What was you doing?
Teena: Dyamond started crying and I had to apologize.
Traci: Good, cuz you can't be being evil to my fav niece. But Dawn got something to tell us.
Teena: What is it? Tell us now.
Dawn: Aight, aight. Well, Cornell and I are having another baby.
Teena: OMG! You're pregnant?
Dawn: Yeah, but wait there's more.
Traci: What?
Dawn: We've decided to move to N.O. and be with y'all.
Traci: About damn time.
Teena: Ya know? So when y'all moving?
Dawn: In prolly 2 weeks.
~They all scream (lol)~
~2 weeks later Dawn, Cornell, and Jajuan moved to New Orleans. The girls reopened Original Stylez and the guys moved SNZ Records to N.O. Zane and Traci got married, Teena and VoShonne got engaged, and Dawn and Cornell had a little girl they named Anya Nichelle Haynes. SNZ Records took off and they all became rich and lived ghetto fabulous (as if they weren't before, I mean Suburbans, Escalades, and Navigators come on now!)
The End
Now tell me what y'all think. Was it tight? Did it suck? What's the deal? Holla!!
*~Dawn~*
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