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Date Posted: 08/ 7/08 11:02:24pm
Author: Dimon
Subject: Re: Vertigo (1st edit)
In reply to: Brad 's message, "Re: Vertigo (1st edit)" on 08/ 6/08 10:41:40pm


Thanks Brad...I agree with you both...this should be two. Will re-work. :)



>I've read this several times
>like the imagery as usual
>especially the parallels of pac man and being chased
>by and eating ghosts : )
>
>It still feels like 2 seperate poems, the first one
>ending with imagination......
>just my 2 cents

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