Date Posted:09/ 1/08 6:09:18pm Author: Brad Subject: Re: The Garden In reply to:
Louie
's message, "Re: The Garden" on 08/29/08 5:14:10pm
yeah, i kind of had second thoughts about that line
i'd like to put a positive spin on it or at least give the possibility of hope. I was thinking of changing that 3rd line to, "until their purpose wilts or blosoms" But I wrote it the way I wrote it when I wrote. And that's that I guess. In the end all the flowers and weeds wilt, with only the hope they multiply before they die. there are probably more ways to interpret it than I am seeing. I digress, thanks for reading and the comment, Louie : )
What meaning do you get out of that stanza? why did you like it?
