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Date Posted: 06/26/08 6:49:18pm
Author: Dimon
Subject: Re: Des
In reply to: Pereaux 's message, "Des" on 06/ 8/08 9:40:12pm

>garnish
>the evening
>with crumbs
>fit for a mouse
>a mouse
>whose oversized ears
>could hear the sun
>as it fell
>soflty on amber marble
>crumbs were not what
>he was looking for
>rather
>it was words
>that fed
>his soul


I do not know enough about amber marble to understand why it is included in your poem...could you throw me a bone? Otherwise, I liked this.

MD

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