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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 10:37:03pm
Author: Leisa
Subject: Re: The 30's
In reply to: Brad 's message, "The 30's" on 08/ 2/09 2:21:23pm

this is a very good premise for a poem, Brad
but you can do better. it feel disjointed.
needs something to tie it together......and you can do it - so if you decide to rework this - I'd love to read again



>Opening a Bible
>to read
>here these facts are written
>in Nineteen, Thirty, and Seven
>
>Here were born
>here were married
>a tree branch blossomed
>from two that tarried
>
>for 71 years
>
>To have lived through the thirties
>when all the world was
>black and white
>with dreams
>
>times so bitter sweet
>when despair brought together
>brother and brother
>in a rally cry
>
>and all the sounds
>of the world
>were picking up
>speed
>
>when there was still innocence
>in romance
>how bright
>are the highlights
>
>to be
>rediscovered...

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