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Date Posted: 09/27/09 11:39:38am
Author: B
Subject: Re: Autumn Equinox
In reply to: Frances 's message, "Autumn Equinox" on 09/24/09 1:48:57am

"Dream pantheons but never had I
met me speak to me!
The novelty glimpsed happily feels as progression.

~~~~~~~~Survey imagined background,
valleys vast below
the behind I've climbed behind

this peak I've made
on the mesa I drummed
up
too much to tell what builders said

to make these heights and camera homes with vantage vistas
dreamers with strong creative survival skills, we

never leave a seat without our humour packed
never leave our love checked in a careless depot
knows where and why the winds come and go
kept the wonder but left the wander
all the universe pleas an edit`~

true self on the starlight trail of truelove
and quilts, and the seat, pillows of awareness-
where answers come.
`````````````````"

love love, LOVE this!
kept the wonder but left the wander
true self on the starlight trail of true love

REALLY like your use of alliteration and assonance
Well done, would love to read more!

Dream Pantheons... (sigh) that makes me swoon

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