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Date Posted: 11/ 8/09 3:20:57am
Author: Frances
Subject: Re: Fractal
In reply to: Brad 's message, "Re: Fractal" on 11/ 7/09 10:33:33pm

>REALLY like this new version, Frances, you paint an
>exquisite picture of the place you're referring to can
>almost place it, but leave the reader to fill in the
>pieces for themselves.
>nice write

Thanks Brad, for taking a look! as I remember this version just needs large percent of words removed , a few rearranged- plus then create a tighter expression of fractal.I intend to work with it over lotsa time, I have rarely been interested in rewrite edit.
I've always been wanting to spout a new now poem - or babbe endless distantly connected thoughts in which I find delight , maybe too much delight.
ten and more years of poetry posting and I'm ready in toto to polish-- ha- I see myself lying in a sense- not in toto ready to polish- I'm ready to go to sleep ! lol
gonna take my lil 17 yr old to traders village- her idea, but I predict a fun cool weather day- if I sleep a bit morenowyawn.
I can work on this a stanza, or less, at a time. happy thought!

fract frances fracas fractal franc frank fractious
fract tile tyle tell tale fra frenz frenzy friend
franc in sense, f, ran, says, ces, cest- siesta

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