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Date Posted: 20:36:03 06/16/01 Sat
Author: Raving Beauty
Subject: ++Her eyes still so pained.....++
In reply to: Flaming Myst ; Escaped Silence 's message, "His eyes feel in pain as his heart seems to fall apart...." on 20:16:26 06/16/01 Sat

Do you not understand how much you hurt me by taking her after you gave me position as your mate, and lead mare? She gets up, her whole body quivering, I can't live like this. She turns from the one she had given her whole heart to, and got it crushed yet again, her first stallion crushed it with all his might, and now she felt the same pain she did then. She no longer has any beauty, as her black coat turns to grey, and she gets thinner, maybe I can put myself out of this misery I am in she mumbles, I need a stallions attention fully on me, I can't take the risk I have taken before, it hurt me once, it hurt my mother, I don't wish for it to happen again. She walks deeper into the darkness, she lies on the ground, crying hard, her life was a mess, it felt like a living hell, Sand Storm ruined her life, and now she would never forget it. She lied there, crying for the love she had given yet another steed, but lost to another mares presence. Her eyes no longer showed anything, she was replaced with a blank face, no fire shown in her anymore, it was as if her spirit, and her will to live had been taken from her, and she was slowly dying off. She knew it'd be better this way, but there was no way for anyone to imagine the pain she was in her whole life running here and there, losing a stallion, a foal, and another one she had given her whole heart, and trust to in a hand basket as though it seemed. Now he had taken it, and to her seemingly crushed it. She lies her head in the dust, hoping her death came quickly.

(Only one thing can save her now, and I think everyone knows what that is)

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++More.....++ -- Raving Beauty, Fuco Kola, 20:41:52 06/16/01 Sat
His eyes pained he follows her quietly and he lays down beside her.... -- Flaming Myst; A heart too easy to surrender, 20:43:24 06/16/01 Sat
- ++She hadn't wished for this to happen......++ -- Raving Beauty, Fuco Kola, 20:57:11 06/16/01 Sat
  - ++Dying eyes++ -- Raving Beauty, Fuco Kola, 21:08:10 06/16/01 Sat
    - ++Light's going out++ -- Enchantress(Nickname of Raving Beauty), 21:22:59 06/16/01 Sat
      - ::Tears shine in her eyes as she takes a step back:: -- Sand Storm ::Goddess of the Desert::, 22:16:14 06/16/01 Sat
        ++Rears++ -- Enchantress, 03:52:15 06/17/01 Sun
        ::Shakes her head:: -- Sand Storm ::Goddess of the Desert::, 09:09:58 06/17/01 Sun