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Subject: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
Tortalla
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Date Posted: 20:42:11 02/27/02 Wed

Everything blinks to black as silence rears its sometimes-ugly head. You are completely alone in the darkness…but something is wailing. A scene flips into view, completely encasing you, and you’re next to a hospital bed. The doctor sighs and looks up at you and your parents. “I’m sorry to say this…it will be difficult to understand…but…I’m afraid David has a terminal illness. There’s no chance for survival.” You stare, not believing the diagnosis. But it’s true. Your brother has cancer. And he will not survive it. The scene spins away, leaving you alone in the darkness…alone with your thoughts.

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[> Subject: *stares in totall shock*


Author:
DJ
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Date Posted: 19:37:11 02/28/02 Thu

Why Dave? Why?
OOC: Who the heck is David?

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[> Subject: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


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Tortalla
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Date Posted: 20:08:30 03/01/02 Fri

Before your eyes, the months pass...years pass...Dave withers before you, and you are powerless to stop it...you are back at the hospital...tubes are hooked up to his nose, throat, and stomach. A machine moniters his pulse. An IV is plugged into his arm. He's breathing heavily. The doctors look at you with sympathy and pity, and slowly shake their heads.
OOC: David would be the full name of Dave...duh..

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[> Subject: Re: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
DJ
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Date Posted: 21:49:17 03/02/02 Sat

*goes to his knees placing his head in his hands* That's not going to happen....

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[> Subject: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
Tortalla
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Date Posted: 19:25:16 03/05/02 Tue

Too late. Dave takes one last, shuddering breath, then his head collapses onto his shoulder. The heart monitor beeps rapidly for a moment, then goes silent as Dave slowly begins to pale, his limbs go limp. Your family begins to sob as doctors enter, put Dave's body into a body bag and wheel him out to the morgue for final examination.

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[> Subject: Re: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
DJ
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Date Posted: 20:25:05 03/05/02 Tue

No...not going to happen. I won't let it happen.

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[> Subject: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


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Tortalla
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Date Posted: 16:19:15 04/14/02 Sun

But it already has. You watch your parents and siblings, garbed in black, sniffling beside you as someone says a testimony to Dave. A flag is draped over his casket as it is lowered into the ground, and dirt is shoveled over your brother's final resting place. It is done...Dave is gone.

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[> Subject: No no no no no


Author:
DJ
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Date Posted: 18:39:11 04/16/02 Tue

No no no... not possible... please not possible.

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[> Subject: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
Tortalla
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Date Posted: 15:33:20 05/15/02 Wed

And now they turn on you. It's your fault. You killed Dave. "You weren't there for him!" family and friends shriek. "You were gone when he needed you, and now he's gone! It's because of you!" They disown you, refusing to acknowledge you as a member of the family, for you killed Dave. It's your fault, they insist. Doubts peeks through. Is it really my fault?

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[> Subject: Re: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


Author:
DJ
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Date Posted: 18:40:30 05/16/02 Thu

(They've already disowned him) No it isn't my fault... this isn't right, not possible, i can't believe it.... i cant and i won't ..... its not my fault!

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[> Subject: Re: Deeeeejaaaaaaay...


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DJ
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Date Posted: 19:16:28 06/28/02 Fri

OOC: DJ would like to wake up now!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's really boring me....... plzzzzzz

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