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Date Posted: 16:33:22 11/19/02 Tue
Author: bum-b
Subject: whatever dude

dont get so tripped up in your tongue/ man its weak, your style is too young/ quit rhyming with the same words/ add some adverbs, predicates and subjects/ dont get off the subject, dont put your shit public/ not yet, get more variety/ your lines should be your priority/ not hating, not yet, not the level you wanna be on/ youll fall ten flights and your whole soul will be gone/ your history wll be forgotten, it was never established/ trying to act raw, trying to be down, i dont see a savage/ youre know way near cold to the bone/ i laugh when i picture your high tone, try to rip on a microphone/ im sure your shit would break into parts no one can understand/ be a man, realize what you can and cant cram/ into 4 lines of shit sprung off of twigs/ thats stems, just get the picture friend/ grow an imagination and try to make some shit that hasnt alreayd been a trademark/ be smart, dont go blinded, dont shave in the dark/ in the words you try to rhyme, add some syllables/ i can see right through you, your punch line is visible/ eight words before you try to spill sick germs/ young, premature lyracylist wanna-be-heard and be replied "word"...

haha dont worry, man, im not hitting on you....youve earned my respect...PEACE, like the 60s man, 60s

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