damn ive posted this 3 times no1 read it, its ill shit, please read and rate mc's!!!! -- Stezo 2001 "Dedicated to the New Generation"

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Subject: damn ive posted this 3 times no1 read it, its ill shit, please read and rate mc's!!!!

Author:
excellence

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Date Posted: 11:00:00 06/21/01 Thu
Author Host/IP: spider-wf073.proxy.aol.com/205.188.195.192

I horrifically derange the individual's calling them self's rappers/
Insert daggers toward's you're mid section and watch you begin to stagger/
From the blood loss of you're internal circulation/
Viciously execute you with the flavor from my tongue's rotation/
Releasing inner power to approach at you with speeding vengeance/
Devices called torturing weapons critically tear you lim from lim to various directions/
Then finish with a reactin tragic fatality known as injections of poisoned liquid venom/
So let you're soul get brought forth and dissend from the regions of you're body by the force of my life taking metaphors/
My mentality and form is to lyrically strike upon mc's leaven em with their hearts torn
and left behind is you're criticly damaged corpse
A dangerous weapon being my mind displays destructional tactics/
I suffocate artists in my presence resulting with their hands on their throat gaggin/
Enter my spacial perimeter and feel rhythm explode you're whole anatomy/
My rhyming ability physically puts mc's to rest if they battle me/
You're pours widen and extend in length and width gradually/
As I enter and make you spontaneously combust rapidly/
Tragically remove vessel's and cells from you with life draining verses/
Methodically break you down piece by piece until you're whole body disperses/
An advanced immortal obtained object known as my rap game/
Fills you with heart stopping intense amounts of released pain sistained/
As I invade you're concience slightly forcing you to vivid dreams/
And take you're life after taking you're death with fatal schemes/
Mc's were once on this earth until they battle me and get sent to hells scene/
My freestyle's or written's hold a raw force to wipe out you're known identity/
Entities who challenge me slowly drain of important life energy/
In seconds i rearrange you're so called reality to a dark place called hell/
Transform to miniature sizes enter through you're pours and eat at you're brain cells/

So as time elapses one by one the days to go by/
I just proceed to dissend the spirit from body on mc's with muh fuckin rhymes/
That move in upgraded velocity ripping away at you with sharp, jagged, forceful lines/

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[> Subject: please rate dam lol

Author:
exellence
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Date Posted: 12:10:47 06/21/01 Thu
Author Host/IP: spider-wf064.proxy.aol.com/205.188.195.184

>I horrifically derange the individual's calling them
>self's rappers/
>Insert daggers toward's you're mid section and watch
>you begin to stagger/
>From the blood loss of you're internal circulation/
>Viciously execute you with the flavor from my tongue's
>rotation/
>Releasing inner power to approach at you with speeding
>vengeance/
>Devices called torturing weapons critically tear you
>lim from lim to various directions/
>Then finish with a reactin tragic fatality known as
>injections of poisoned liquid venom/
>So let you're soul get brought forth and dissend from
>the regions of you're body by the force of my life
>taking metaphors/
>My mentality and form is to lyrically strike upon mc's
>leaven em with their hearts torn
>and left behind is you're criticly damaged corpse
>A dangerous weapon being my mind displays
>destructional tactics/
>I suffocate artists in my presence resulting with
>their hands on their throat gaggin/
>Enter my spacial perimeter and feel rhythm explode
>you're whole anatomy/
>My rhyming ability physically puts mc's to rest if
>they battle me/
>You're pours widen and extend in length and width
>gradually/
>As I enter and make you spontaneously combust rapidly/
>Tragically remove vessel's and cells from you with
>life draining verses/
>Methodically break you down piece by piece until
>you're whole body disperses/
>An advanced immortal obtained object known as my rap
>game/
>Fills you with heart stopping intense amounts of
>released pain sistained/
>As I invade you're concience slightly forcing you to
>vivid dreams/
>And take you're life after taking you're death with
>fatal schemes/
>Mc's were once on this earth until they battle me and
>get sent to hells scene/
>My freestyle's or written's hold a raw force to wipe
>out you're known identity/
>Entities who challenge me slowly drain of important
>life energy/
>In seconds i rearrange you're so called reality to a
>dark place called hell/
>Transform to miniature sizes enter through you're
>pours and eat at you're brain cells/
>
>So as time elapses one by one the days to go by/
>I just proceed to dissend the spirit from body on mc's
>with muh fuckin rhymes/
>That move in upgraded velocity ripping away at you
>with sharp, jagged, forceful lines/

[> Subject: aight..
Author: 911 a.k.a. Play [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 17:58:28 06/21/01 Thu Author Host/IP: spider-mtc-tf041.proxy.aol.com/64.12.103.36 that shit was straight dawg.. not many complaints.. a couple places could use some work.. kinda got off track once or twice but not much or by far.. i enjoyed this one.. great spit.. peace

[> Subject: a damn good emcee
Author: Nicholas Nice [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:39:31 06/22/01 Fri Author Host/IP: spider-wa021.proxy.aol.com/205.188.192.26 yo that was some aight shit but not your original piece.......i saw times when you came much harder with a different style but its cool......keep it up dawg we need good emcees like you.......peace 6.5/10 creatively