PLEASE NO PARAGRAPH FORMATS!!!.somewhat ill but some parts were just confusin..5/10 -- Stezo 2001 "Dedicated to the New Generation"

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Subject: PLEASE NO PARAGRAPH FORMATS!!!.somewhat ill but some parts were just confusin..5/10

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Date Posted: 23:04:52 06/17/01 Sun
Author Host/IP: spider-wi041.proxy.aol.com/205.188.197.36
In reply to: THUG PRINCE 's message, "REBIRTH" on 22:49:21 06/17/01 Sun

DAWG....

you need to understand tha concept of tha lyrical usage of vocabulary......

you hardly stayed on topic...you switched wut you were writin about to whatever word came into your head....it wuz obvious.....

keep writin and work on tha flow.....NO PARAGRAPHS....DEAL??

5/10.....due to tha fact it hardly made sense....

you know me dawg Im just sayin it how it ease....either you can learn from it or take it as an insult....your choice....Im just tryin tah help you out.....

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MASTERED THE ART OF DESTRUCTION--------THE ORIGINATOR
��Z�ST�R�Z�� aka ��P�IS�N�US RH�M� G�THIC��

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Date Posted: 00:09:46 06/18/01 Mon
Author Host/IP: pm1-33.sidney.da.wcoil.com/206.230.71.49

>i feel an inclination towards elevation// straight
>outta the womb blazing// raising mental fascination//
>new jack rappers catch lyrical infatuation// new
>creation// rebirth of the half man half amazing//
>chasing metaphoric meteorites// that crash into
>fallling stars// my explosive thoughts are iron bars
>//peeped from far like mars //light up the night//
>wars between words and ideas// scared to spit here?//
>its my deadly flowz u fear// st.ides beers chemical
>combination// wont get u intoxicated as my paragraphs
>configuration// facing a mental block// my words shoot
>out da box// out of your screen// into ya eye beam//
>towards ya chakras// down ya spleen //to ya feet//
>down ya building// to ya sidewalks concrete//heat is
>sent from mental creativity// the walls of reality are
>bent//go figure my relativity //ignorance is da enemy
>//thats why i uplift my supremacy// over the
>stupidity// ignorant muthafuckas talk junk// ya spit
>is littering// my spiritual composition// is changing
>the chemical structure of my mental pyramid// my
>hyroglphics iz transmitted as english// archeologists
>couldnt even fuck wit it// or translate// my shit is
>the beginning forms of a super nova// u can feel a
>buzz in outer space//time for the human race to to
>take heed to dis warning//the perfect lyricist is
>forming//inspiring niggas to go to war like hitler//i
>got soldiers swarming//i got the news media
>calling//fbi taps my base of operations //the cia's
>mapped// trying to follow my tracks //my computers
>hacked//even my illegal cable is zapped //i feel like
>godzilla to the japs//monsterous raps// blast out like
>fire from my mouth// melt steel polls covered wit
>solid ice from the north to the south//polar caps
>liquify// when i focus my pyrotechnic third eye//and i
>wont die// i rejuvinate//try to emulate this
>invincible sun// and ya body will start to self
>combust and cremate//making more vibrations be felt
>then radio stations broadcasting subliminal messsages
>wit brainwashing spells//my mind melds// wit heavenly
>messages//reaching time zones so far in the universe
>the angels are still measuring//
stop wit the paragraphs yall, im tired of readin fucken books, u had some good word play but i ain't feel cause of the paragraph form, seperate ya bars in lines PLEASE, or imma stop readin shit. ONE