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Subject: THIZ IZ NICE........RATING INSIDE


Author:
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Date Posted: 16:01:35 06/22/01 Fri
Author Host/IP: spider-tq083.proxy.aol.com/152.163.201.83
In reply to: D LYRIC FEATURING EXCELLENCE 's message, "NICE COLLAB EVERYONE PEEP" on 13:20:15 06/22/01 Fri

YO D.....

Loose tha caps dawg....I seriously dont like readin caps.....I dont think you do either.....really lacks intrest..

But otherwise you still delivered like you were supposed and lived up to your name......
I just think you can work a little more on your wordplay and try to grab tha intrest of tha reader.....then youll be doin just fine.....

As for EX....

Loved tha flow......sick vocab and lyrics to go to it.....damn.....you stood out more on this piece..

i dare mc's to say they can out battle me and d lyric/
our talent combined reaks havoc on you're soul seperatin the body from you're
spirit/
............oooooohh.....beautiful ending...

madd propz to both....

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«‡†¤-TH€ ULTIMAT€ GØD OF ALL €XZIZTIN GØDS-¤†‡»
MASTERED THE ART OF DESTRUCTION--------THE ORIGINATOR
«‡†¤ÐÏZÄST€RÏZ¤†‡» aka «‡†¤PØISØNØUS RH¥M€ GØTHIC¤†‡»

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[> Subject: damn.. Everyone read!!!!!!!


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911 a.k.a. Play
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Date Posted: 10:08:39 06/23/01 Sat
Author Host/IP: spider-wg081.proxy.aol.com/205.188.196.56

damn hott shit..

D: i almost didnt read yours because of the cap. letters but i did.. it was tight.. good flow n use of vocabulary.. my favorite lines were..

"WE CAUSIN MO DEATHS DEN DA HOLOCAUST WHEN WE SWITCH MENTALITIES/
OUR BRUTAL MULTIPLE PERSONALITIES COMBINED IS LIKE CAUSIN FATALITIES/
WE DONE BLAZED STEZO SO MUCH I THINK WE DA DEFINITION OF CASUALTIES/"

now excellence: the name fits you well.. a great usage of vocabulary and wordplay.. i think you would be a great copetitor in battle n also for collabs where you keep switching back in forth playing off each others rhymes.. my favorite lines other than the endin like Diz mentioned was..

"actually we just remove you're skeleton rapidly and begin to tragically
pull you back to us with rhymin gravity that me and d lyric posses forcing
you to endure x rated fatality's/"


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