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Subject: Critics Required

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Brandon�

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Date Posted: 10:46:42 08/17/01 Fri

Ok here's the thing...I'm fairly new to freestylin' on a message board so I just wanted to post a "test" freestyle, and hopefully you'll be kind enough to voice your opinion. But enough small talk, here it is...

Look, I spit rhymes like fire,
Waiting to hear 'em is your desire,
Where does it all come from you man enquire,
It's all for the fire in my desire for the power.
I gotta have it,
I see it I grab it,
If you don't give it up I stab it,
Now you wanna know who I mob with?
I work alone,
I'm in my own zone,
I'm off the dome,
Ya broad better shine my chrome.
My rhymes ain't written,
They ain't carbon-copied,
They may be a little sloppy,
But who's gonna stop me, G'?

I'm fairly new when it comes to freestylin' on message boards so any advice would be greatly apprieciated.
Holla`

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Re: Critics Required (spotted a typo, sorry)	Brandon�	10:49:52 08/17/01 Fri