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Date Posted: 12:34:18 07/12/03 Sat
Author: John_Doe
Subject: Re: Original Ruud Bwoy Vs. John_Doe round 2
In reply to: Original Ruud Bwoy 's message, "Re: Original Ruud Bwoy Vs. John_Doe" on 01:51:12 07/12/03 Sat

agiht tight verse, round 2........

*doe steps to the mic doggin orb*
yo,
thats a good verse, but ima dice it in to pieces//
how you gonna battle someone with strong thoughts, like "carrie's" telekinesis?//
your first verse was weak, so youve stumbled your first step//
your kinda slow, and couldnt bet a quarter on ya own wit//
look at you, talking to ya self, are ya parents siblings?//
"fun and games" im having fun twisting up ya verse, like childrens scribblings//
your losing ORB, and you cant just "get away" like a snicker//
you falling quicker than acholics downing bottles of liquor//
**yo john what ya doin?… hey get off me, im not gay!**
your verse is a good example of one of ya fantasies, me touching you//
shyt, if i saw ya perverted ass on the street, i wouldnt even apraoch you//
you a perv, in the middle of the day giving kids candy to get in ya car//
but then, his dad comes out the bar, straps you to a pool table and burns ya ass with cigars//
*original R... screams as your hear sizzling*
and now yo going back to high school, *starting to cry* no wait dont shed no tears//
19 in the 3rd grade, and those were your good years//
because for once someone accually "looked up to you"// lol
but dont get angry, cuz im just clownin too//
so, your after me, well get ready for the lyrical closeline//
cuz your lyrics are tight, but simply cant hold mine//

JOHN_DOE..........

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