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Date Posted: 13:32:38 09/07/01 Fri
Author: Pokey's red headed stepchild
Subject: S.O.S.-an eye openning experience
In reply to: Son Of Smilner 's message, "S.O.S." on 21:36:27 09/05/01 Wed

You my dear sorry fiend have indeed gotten to me...mostly my funny bone, but got to me you did. I love your little letter to the distressed family. I have to big questions to start out with:
1) Why are you calling a Montana number? ('406' is the area code for the state of Montana, '716' is the area code of Rochester)
2) Why would you drive close to 350 miles to kill the girl? (Westchester is roughly 341.6 miles from Rochester)

I can now sleep soundly at night because I know you have no sense of direction and clearly called a wrong number.

You have once again lost the power of the monster-realism. What guy has not been pissed at having been turned down? Admittedly I don't know any one personally who would strike at revenge that bad, but even still on a basic level (sense of rejection. your story (in all of this I mean 'THE CONFESSION') is therefore sort of a worse monster in that we all can see parts of our selves in it. Edger Allen Poe was a master of realistic villains ('tell tale heart', 'cask of Amontillado'). You are by far not a Poe, but you did at one point have a small sliver of his power.

This little short work brings you back to your roots of the Saturday night B-movie, formulaic and predictable. I do not fear you, for I know you cannot hurt me.

I encourage you to keep writing. it is al the very least entertaining. Hopefully you your writing will improve,then once you graduate from high school, if you still have the drive for fiction I strongly encourage you to study writing and philosophy, to better your art. I wait hopeful that you will write the next horror novel. I do so enjoy a fun story.

Good day
>I see I am getting too some of you, Your starting to
>realize That I am a monster and nothing can stop me,
>YOUR GOD made me and the only One or Thing that can
>stop me Now is YOUR GOD. I come from the streets and
>Gutters I AM THE "SON OF SMILNER".
>
>My letter to the distressed Family,
>
>On June the 3rd I called on you at 406-----. Brought
>you cheesecake. We had lunch. Grace sat in my lap
>and kissed me. I made up my mind to eat her.
>
>On the pretense of taking her to a party. You said
>Yes she could go. I took her to an empty house in
>Westchester I had already picked out. When we got
>there, I told her to remain outside. She picked
>wildflowers. I went upstairs and stripped all my
>clothes off. I knew if I did not I would get her
>blood on them.
>
>When all was ready I went to the window and Called
>her. Then I hid in a closet until she was in the
>room. When she saw me all naked she began to cry and
>tried to run down the stairs. I grabbed her and she
>said she would tell her mamma.
>
>First I stripped her naked. How she did kick -- bite
>and scratch. I choked her to death, then cut her in
>small pieces so I could take my meat to my rooms.
>Cook and eat it. How sweet and tender her little ass
>was roasted in the oven. It took me 9 days to eat her
>entire body. I did not fuck her though I could of,
>had I wished. She died a virgin."

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