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Subject: my second place poem


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Brittni
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Date Posted: 17:24:42 03/13/03 Thu
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I would really like to share my second place poem with you all. I don't find it to be a very good one but the judges at the second largest poetry convention seemed to think so. I won a silver cup, and $5000.00 as a second place prize. it is short and not that interesting but some people seem to like it and I hope you will be one of them. please tell me what you think of it and if there is anything you lked most or disliked the most about it.

I lie thinking deep into the night.
Where is he, where's my Mister Right?
All my friends assure me saying, "he'll come along."
But now I am wondering what if he's Mister wrong.
I've waited twelve years now and I think it's time
To forget this special guy and finish this rhyme.

- Brittni Foley
This poem has a copyright so please ask permission before using my poem.
Thanks, Brittni

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