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Lori S. Maynard
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Date Posted: 09:26:46 12/14/02 Sat
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In reply to: Jagchina 's message, "Tire Swing" on 02:44:59 12/14/02 Sat

Welcome to the Poetry Carnival! Excellent poem with a nice flow and rhyme. The couplet rhyme does well here. :) To me, I received two impressions from the poem: revisiting a childhood spot/memory and also it seemed as though it was a metaphore for life as well.

Hope to see more posts :)

I enjoyed the imagery of these lines in particular:

"ealing with blue sky and heavenly wind-burn."

Hes blind all the same but insists he hears creaking."

Lori

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