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Subject: Re: Dark Envy

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Lori S. Maynard

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Date Posted: 23:34:39 03/15/02 Fri
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In reply to: Antipodi 's message, "Dark Envy" on 20:36:41 03/14/02 Thu

Wow, this reads like the story of a freaky stalker!

At first, I had thought that it was the words of someone who'd lost a love to someone else, but that last sentence... I didn't see that one coming. :)

I liked how you broke up your lines. Sort of shows the ranting of this person. Talking in a short, fast sentence and saying one word to catch a breath. Another sentence and then another breath and one word.

Lori

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Dark Envy	Wanda	10:51:23 03/16/02 Sat

Re: Dark Envy	Deb	16:15:34 03/16/02 Sat