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Date Posted:23:34:39 03/15/02 Fri Author Host/IP: spider-wa034.proxy.aol.com/188.8.131.52 In reply to:
's message, "Dark Envy" on 20:36:41 03/14/02 Thu
Wow, this reads like the story of a freaky stalker!
At first, I had thought that it was the words of someone who'd lost a love to someone else, but that last sentence... I didn't see that one coming. :)
I liked how you broke up your lines. Sort of shows the ranting of this person. Talking in a short, fast sentence and saying one word to catch a breath. Another sentence and then another breath and one word.