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Lori S. Maynard
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Date Posted: 21:43:00 02/03/02 Sun
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In reply to: Tracy Gelsleichter 's message, "A Murder Of Crows" on 19:59:01 02/03/02 Sun

Welcome to the Poetry Carnival, and how could you top such a first, great poem?

I'm impressed with your imagery and story-weaving with a great moral. You really captured my attention on the second line and throughout.

Great play on words with the title and the content, Murder of Crows. I wonder why it is that a flock is called a murder.

"Like the valley of darkness, before my eyes
Laid a blanket of blackened feathers
Limp they lay like the inherent sight of death
Side by side, they died together"

Great stanza!

I surely hope to see more of your work posted at the Carnival

Lori

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