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Date Posted:20:56:51 10/08/01 Mon Author Host/IP: pool0235.cvx14-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net/209.179.38.235 In reply to:
Mac
's message, "“Words of Sand”" on 19:40:46 10/08/01 Mon
My words are mere grains
of common place sand
found on any beach
Ahhh... you lie like a rug... LOL... Poetry pages ARE often filled with this indistinguishable dark gray globbage about how my boyfriend left me and what is he thinking and does he still love me from far away and I'll never be the same til he comes back and hurts me some more and AAAAAAAAGGGH!!!!!
No, this poem of yours I like... it's humble, introspective, rational with just enough of a cryptic overtone at the end to jostle the mental cogs into gear.
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