VoyForums
[ Show ]
Support VoyForums
[ Shrink ]
VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

Login ] [ Contact Forum Admin ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 12345678[9]10 ]
Subject: Re: Dark Twisted Words, Light Driven Moods


Author:
Lori S. Maynard
[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]
Date Posted: 09:05:24 11/26/01 Mon
Author Host/IP: spider-ti062.proxy.aol.com/152.163.194.202
In reply to: David Young 's message, "Dark Twisted Words, Light Driven Moods" on 10:16:14 11/23/01 Fri

Wow, very descriptive. Read almost like a dream. I loved the image of trees creeping and digging and hiding; fearful of climbing, then later, how they garden flowers. Love exploding within the realm of darkness, and letting your fantasies take flight.

"Vague direction to places in eerie mists
Stagnant waters placid in meaning
Damp mold evading the light of purity
O'bscure smells with obscure sources"

This was my most favorite stanza. I could smell the rotted dampness.

Nice useage of the elevated language

Lori

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]


Post a message:
This forum requires an account to post.
[ Create Account ]
[ Login ]
[ Contact Forum Admin ]


Forum timezone: GMT-5
VF Version: 3.00b, ConfDB:
Before posting please read our privacy policy.
VoyForums(tm) is a Free Service from Voyager Info-Systems.
Copyright © 1998-2019 Voyager Info-Systems. All Rights Reserved.