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Subject: Re: My Inner Seclusion

Lori S. Maynard
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Date Posted: 10:54:39 11/29/01 Thu
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In reply to: D.Lester Young (White Eagle) 's message, "My Inner Seclusion" on 01:06:32 11/28/01 Wed

Wow! You're really improving on your thoughts (don't know if the proper term) in your poetry. It reads so peaceful and I can see and feel every detail in this poem. I love your use of descriptions.

"A gust of virgin thought blew the autumn specs"

"Was holding me close
Yet it had no meaning and no form to hold on to"

"Direction faced everywhere but nowhere
Color lacked depth for it all seemed the same
Stillness had no ears
Yet in all the madness
Came a light in the same color as the rest"

Great words!


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