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Subject: ...neeeeed opinions........ Author: Samantha [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 15:03:07 12/02/01 Sun I'm horrible at writing poetry and I don't normally try, but I was looking through some stuff I wrote last year and I came across this thing. I really liked it and couldn't believe that I wrote it. Now I'm looking for people to read it and give me some advice. Unfortunatly the theming is rather depressing and if I ask any of my real life friends, they'd get weird on me. It's happened before, and I don't need them telling me I should see a couneslor. So anyways, if you could just read it over and tell me what you like, what you don't like, what should be fixed, etc, I'd be really greatful. Thanks. enigma © samantha johnson the enigmatic lies wrap around my shadow a layer of ironic emotions filling my soul the words you spoke so easily it all meant nothing the tone of your hypnotic voice lulling my cautious senses so skillfully the carefully choosen words blinding by uneducated mind you stripped me to the bone and left my logic beneath the concrete to a place i could never reach a place of enigmatic lies and shadows [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date SAMMYDOODLE CASSIEDOODLE 00:19:37 12/04/01 Tue *huggles fer cassiedoodle* thankies! (NT) -- Sammydoodle, 15:53:26 12/04/01 Tue Cass.. -- Sourcey and co., 16:27:46 12/05/01 Wed