Date Posted:16:45:27 01/30/00 Sun Author: Uzi Subject: Re: your name and your blood In reply to:
kendall a. bell
's message, "your name and your blood" on 20:08:24 01/27/00 Thu
Great poem! Just one small change I would make: the last line should read "and simply... hug." No need for the word "just." It should be one or the other. JUST my humble opinion!:-)
