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Date Posted: 01:08:08 02/06/00 Sun
Author: Dimon
Subject: Re: Shallow Feeling, Deep Despair
In reply to: Gunslinger 's message, "Shallow Feeling, Deep Despair" on 19:06:22 01/31/00 Mon

>Wow! Hey, Gun, this was a masterpiece! Really, Really dug this one. The only thing I would humbly advise is to replace conscience with something that decries a more soul quaking experience. These emotions seem to well far beyond conscience thought...well hey, but then again, defiling the awareness of doing the right thing DOES work.. hmmm, a quandry, well thats my two cents. Hope one of those wooden coins came up heads. :)


Shallow feeling, deep despair-
> How I hate that dreadful pair...
> Although you may not understand
> The two of them go hand in hand.
> Shallow feelings sponsor lies-
> You find too late, to your surprise
> The vows of love and that “forever”
> All too soon, rescind to “never”.
> Artistic fools, the poets know-
> Poor, mad Edgar Allen Poe
> The tapping at the sill or door-
> The wretched cry of, “Nevermore”.
> Nevermore to wear a smile-
> Conscience ever more defiled-
> Despair so deep one cannot sound-
> Nor bottom of the slough is found..
> Death is close upon you stealing
> All because of shallow feeling.

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