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Date Posted: 10:27:20 04/25/00 Tue
Author: Jen ;-)
Subject: Re: no other
In reply to: no other ( re-written 's message, "Re: no other" on 14:16:31 04/21/00 Fri

I like the re-write better than the original...but had you ever consicered taking the "you" out of the last line entirely?

no other task required

Somehow I like the simplicity of that.
(I tend to like the required rather than the asked, since you use asked...the rhyme there just doesn't quite fit to me...)

Just me and my opining...
J



> > you live that you may learn to love,
> > you love that you may learn to live
> > no other task is asked of you.

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