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>these are both good and I see nothing that needs >critiquing - maybe someone else will come along and >offer something for you. >they look [read] fine to me as they are. > >and after reconsideration, the board will remain open. >thanks for posting! > >Leisa*) > >>2. choices >> >> >>i am a man >>with many faces >>many unknown >>even to me >>i hide my fears >>when i shed my tears >>shove down my anger >>when it rises >>i am the nice guy >>everyone likes >>i am hurting >>i am scared >>and i have cried out >>for help >>answered with silence >>desperation fills me >>and i come to a choice >>now in this moment >>it is time to start living >>or dying >>i will live >>if its all the same to you >> >>1. hidden >> >>quietly in the shadows >>i sit and wait >>watch and wonder >>i hide from the world >>cause it runs from me >>both monsters >>hideous and cold >>i see it for what it is >>and it exploits me >>for what i am >>a faceless man >>in a nameless world >>a number in a machine >>machine of industry >>so i hide in its vastness >>and it hides in my silence >>centered in my fear >>both too awfull to see >>to truely see

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