Re: well before you close it -- Poetry Grace and Insanity

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Date Posted: 07:03:44 03/07/01 Wed
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: well before you close it
In reply to: it doesn't matter 's message, "well before you close it" on 21:14:52 03/06/01 Tue

these are both good and I see nothing that needs critiquing - maybe someone else will come along and offer something for you.
they look [read] fine to me as they are.

and after reconsideration, the board will remain open.
thanks for posting!

Leisa*)

>2. choices
>
>
>i am a man
>with many faces
>many unknown
>even to me
>i hide my fears
>when i shed my tears
>shove down my anger
>when it rises
>i am the nice guy
>everyone likes
>i am hurting
>i am scared
>and i have cried out
>for help
>answered with silence
>desperation fills me
>and i come to a choice
>now in this moment
>it is time to start living
>or dying
>i will live
>if its all the same to you
>
>1. hidden
>
>quietly in the shadows
>i sit and wait
>watch and wonder
>i hide from the world
>cause it runs from me
>both monsters
>hideous and cold
>i see it for what it is
>and it exploits me
>for what i am
>a faceless man
>in a nameless world
>a number in a machine
>machine of industry
>so i hide in its vastness
>and it hides in my silence
>centered in my fear
>both too awfull to see
>to truely see

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