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Date Posted: 21:47:24 06/24/01 Sun
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: The Stamp
In reply to: Plo 's message, "The Stamp" on 11:19:14 06/23/01 Sat

Some nice things to think about,
thanks for posting here, Plo,
unfortunately this board is mostly dead.
If you were looking for real crits, I'm afraid it could take awhile for anyone to stop by.

Did you mean, in this first line,
"a" stamp collecting?
or just stamp collecting?
it really wasn't clear to me....
or maybe
"like stamp collecting"?
or even stamp collection?
I dunno - actually the more I read it as you have it, the more sense it makes to me so ignore me...
:)



>Who thinks a poetry is a stamp-collecting,
>Flowers, birds and tears?
>Who's going to think it is not possible to discover
>more lands?
>Human tongues are not iron, remind banners on the
>wind.
>They wither without the air.
>
>Let's despair. When a poetry reminds
>Iron flowers, tears and birds.
>
>Are you going to spend your life
>In an oddity museum? {I Like this line..}
>Among the stamps which are not touched
>By tongues?
>
>This is insanity. With no irony.
{Great endline!!}

Leisa*)

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