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>Some nice things to think about, >thanks for posting here, Plo, >unfortunately this board is mostly dead. >If you were looking for real crits, I'm afraid it >could take awhile for anyone to stop by. > >Did you mean, in this first line, >"a" stamp collecting? >or just stamp collecting? >it really wasn't clear to me.... >or maybe >"like stamp collecting"? >or even stamp collection? >I dunno - actually the more I read it as you have it, >the more sense it makes to me so ignore me... >:) > > > >>Who thinks a poetry is a stamp-collecting, >>Flowers, birds and tears? >>Who's going to think it is not possible to discover >>more lands? >>Human tongues are not iron, remind banners on the >>wind. >>They wither without the air. >> >>Let's despair. When a poetry reminds >>Iron flowers, tears and birds. >> >>Are you going to spend your life >>In an oddity museum? {I Like this line..} >>Among the stamps which are not touched >>By tongues? >> >>This is insanity. With no irony. >{Great endline!!} > >Leisa*)

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