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Date Posted: 23:48:54 11/10/02 Sun
Author: Leisa*)
Subject: Re: Feelings
In reply to: Bobby 's message, "Feelings" on 21:41:10 10/31/02 Thu

sad, yet heartfelt. feels way too personal to actually offer any sort of crit.

Leisa*)

>I know some things I say aren’t fair,
>Even though I realize this we both know this, these
>feelings are still here.
>Each of us has our flaws,
>Some not as noticeable.
>While I writhe in the pain of deceit,
>I can’t help but to cut off these feet.
>As a result, we will both be screwed because
>I know I will shortly come unglued.
>Cutting them off so I can deal with a new pain so I
>can’t
>See your face again.
>Would that be to lose or to gain?
>I try to shield you from my pain,
>But I know you truly care.
>And I have to ask myself,
>Is all this really honestly fair?
>That you hold my problems in your head,
>You take them to bed, only to manifest the dread.
>I want to keep things from you keep them inside.
>But I know if I do this,
>I will surely have to die.

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