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Subject: 麥辯


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Date Posted: 20:59:11 10/04/01 Thu
In reply to: 麥 's message, "我兩個都唔投" on 06:56:45 10/01/01 Mon


>譚的詩傾向哲學和語言的擺弄,

「語言的擺弄」我同意,但我認為他的詩很少哲學成分,通常是以推理上的悖論造成不可解。他的悖論之多,可算同輩之冠,還唔係不可解?!

>鄧的詩以寓言表達沉潛的感情,
>少有可直接感受的生活質感,也少有直接單純的幻想.

拿我本人就好憎自己寫寓言詩既,歌德話寓言詩係初入門者才寫的。衰在我真係寫好多,證明本人詩藝委實平平,點會不可解(莫非我連表達都有問題!?)!?
我認為寓言的簡單之處就在於,全部都是像代數一樣,x=2的話,所有x都等於2,出現幾多個x都冇問題。而x=2的推論則只須參照常識(因為符碼系統都來自日常生活的約定俗成),正正是最直接單純的!

>意即,
>譚和鄧的詩都未能做到雅俗共賞,
>或接近雅俗共賞.
>如是,
>也就與淺白無緣.
反證:李商隱算是雅俗共賞了(連電視劇都引他的詩),但又不淺白。

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