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Subject: Re: 評「評『很久沒貼詩』」


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小二的同學
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Date Posted: 08:44:08 06/19/01 Tue
In reply to: 坐在水塔頂看星沉影寂的人 's message, "Re: 評「很久沒貼詩」" on 20:52:59 06/12/01 Tue

>如果隨意組幾行斷句就好
>那麼,我也懂得詩
>想起小一的班主任
>圓圓的鏡框溫柔的臉容
>在每行字的頂端畫兩個紅三角
>笑說:「還未懂得分段呢。」

除了出言不遜之外
這詩也倒有趣。

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只是形式問題嗎?出現問題也可以是美麗的22:46:27 06/23/01 Sat


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