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Subject: 是散文


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Date Posted: 21:39:40 06/19/01 Tue
In reply to: 好久沒手痕 's message, "嘩,我也來寫詩" on 08:40:29 06/19/01 Tue

[ 數到4的時候 ]

寒冷的塵埃飄散在花園四周。
漂移的過程要開始了,親愛的,你會忘記我們的約定嗎,門匙的花紋,螺旋紋的鏽,數到4的時候。

當路燈的光普照著蝸牛被碾碎的屍體,(請)把風衣的拉鍊拉上,模擬你愛過的人說話的語氣,他走路的姿勢,點煙時手指彎曲的弧度,慣性低垂的眼,無法糾正的別字,連同你再不了解的所有。

離開你的貓,你的牛奶開出花朵,開展漫長的、不需要確定的旅程。

離開曾經熟悉的小食亭。任何約會過的地方。把錢幣投進木馬的瞳孔。學習飛翔的口訣。(想起)你喜歡過的字、詞,喜歡過的味道。
(想起)熱帶魚身上的顏色。在陌生的河道潛泳、覓食。(想起)你吻過的橡樹後來開滿了花。蝴蝶都結成了霜。(滯)濟留在溫暖的季節裡。遺失屬於他人的指環。照片簿上被撕去的畢業照。

陌生人的吻。脫去襪子與鞋一同奔跑。裸體的。懷念晴天。很冷的時候。在陌生人身上找到火柴的晚上。

各自複習各自的語言。遺留煙花的碎屑。捲走整座樹林的風暴。(但)言語之間留下的縫隙足夠收藏龐大混雜的哀傷嗎,足夠嗎(?)

離開一切的人再回來的時候,鑰匙是迴旋的燈,房間裡匿藏的聲響。然後命運是誤解,快樂是空白的陰影,美麗是適度的憂傷。即使把過程延長甚至重複,我們還是無法肯定彼此間的牽繫。

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重頭看了幾遍,覺得可能是一篇優美的散文,卻不可能是一篇新詩,或者我的新書讀得太少,也為我的「出言不遜」道歉,但不改愚見。這裡的文化原來是不許這樣的,恕我冒昧了。

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願意討論什麼時候都是好的但我很難上網可能會遲覆不好意思04:35:47 06/22/01 Fri


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