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Subject: Re: 無疑我也喜歡


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所以請多多貼詩
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Date Posted: 08:27:36 07/21/01 Sat
In reply to: 老老實實 's message, "Re: 說得沒錯: 有人讀詩, 詩便有了意義." on 13:27:55 07/18/01 Wed

這是我的夢


[ 與幽靈同處的居所 II ]

(不要約定。千萬不要約定。)

離開溫暖的被窩,清晨時份我把屋裡的燈亮起,察看我偷來的象,熱度還沒有退掉,我把剛煮好的咖啡放進糖裡。你在隔壁的房間熟睡,你夢見你的貓回來了,從你故意趟開的門縫像誰的步履誰的陰影,覆蓋著你腕上的傷口。你只是夢見而已,像我夢見我的樹林終於開滿了花,飛散潮濕的棉絮,長出美麗的翅膀,我拾到金黃的種籽,聽見豆萊裂開的聲音,我也──只是夢見而已我的樹林開滿了我從沒有夢見過的花朵我甚至──不敢讓自己呼吸,害怕而擔憂像整個樹林的陰影一樣龐大、混雜,沒有其他的方法了是嗎。我甚至想要

連你的呼吸也一併止息。

20001120 11:33 p.m.




>不知為不知,我真的不認得你是誰
>看你的話,我覺得應該和我受著類似的教育,看著相近的書
>但我認不出你是誰
>我想不起誰會打像你一樣的標點
>我的頭殼壞掉了
>
>>從詩之中獲得力量, 所以寫詩
>>從詩之中感受痛苦, 所以寫詩
>>無法也無意欲抽離, 從詩裡面從自己裡面
>>希望我們都不是這樣
>>不只這樣
>>
>>(無疑, 我是喜歡小樺的詩的: 一種讓人感到空洞的實在)
>>
>>>七月
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>我答應我的土地上要開滿盛長的花,因為雙生的血脈糾纏,?>H
>>?>帠n弱的善意。七色的薊草,細長堅執的,長年永遠一直開?>?>>我
>>>的土地盡頭,氣息足以召喚所有未被唱過的愉悅歌謠,變幻?>F
>>?>備x鵡的蝴蝶。要有這些。
>>>
>>>而夢境夜夜襲來:灰色的角落裡我拖著長不大的辮子,胸膛?>?>>?>穸X的魔幻藤蔓所封閉的光線與呼救聲,只震破我的耳朵--?>?>>光
>>>失控,所有的玻璃在我手中破爛。都有這些。
>>>
>>>以歌聲借代呼叫,以隱喻替換血痕,靜靜安坐,手指交疊置?>?>>?>奶W,我等待,身上的青紫終於構成光線的顏色。而後來我?>?>>土
>>>地終於開了我無法形容的花,我夢見。

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Re: 無疑我也喜歡 (NT)但這首詩你已經貼過在下面了劉師姐12:49:59 07/22/01 Sun
亞閃閃同學,得閒同清水灣的漁火比下,看哪個更加閃,呵呵. (NT)紅雲21:14:55 07/22/01 Sun


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