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Subject: 漠視樓上二位的私密神態嘗試抽空談論散文詩的問題


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超越哀傷的棘刺,今天是令人無法安穩的日子
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Date Posted: 10:35:27 11/15/00 Wed
In reply to: 我的確有個愛過的女孩她留下了貓,和抓痕。 's message, "芷韻,這是跟我說的話嗎?" on 09:25:08 11/15/00 Wed

我看過的散文詩不多,多數是商禽的,再來便是劉芷韻和廖偉棠。
然而本人對散文詩極有興趣。
看了樓上二位的散文詩,令我想到的其中一樣是,
散文詩除了混合散文和詩之外,似乎也不可避免地涉及小說的敘事
元素。是因為書寫方式令作者不自覺地採取推進式而非放射式地指
向同一個點?是讀者在閱\讀時慣性地將即使聯結非常鬆散的文句當
作有敘事性的線性的而自己加上關聯?(這點好像是索緒爾說的,或是普洛
普。)





(不要約定。雖然約定被記得令人溫慰但千萬,千萬不要約定。)
(噢再聲明一次我是局外人。)



> 動物園裡的擔憂
>
> 我非常擔憂我們皮包裡的紙包巧克力會變暖,真的很害怕。沒?> 野戍畯抴N什麼地方也去不了呀即使現在我們在動物園的籠子前
> 面徘徊著找尋分吃三明治的最佳景觀。妳說給我吧我替你揹一?> U這盛滿貓毛的大背包。我說不用了但請監視我,別讓我再把手
> 按在放巧克力奶的位置,因為奶會暖掉。但,或者我是因為怕?> 朵|變暖才不時摸它的。
>
> 不能擱的。我跡近神經質的強調。而妳總耐心的摸我的頭。
>
> 而寫著蟒蛇的的籠子裡面只有一堆綠色的草。有個老女護林員?> a我繞過籠子去看龜。我把頭擠進縫隙但什麼都看不到。當我把
> 頭抽離狹迫的籠邊時,她正定睛望著我的鼻尖,嗅著我身上的?> 薿均C而妳。妳已經走到噴水池那邊去了。
>
> 可是這動物園是沒有噴水池的。它在七年前的冬天就給拆掉了?> C那年我還沒有認識妳,也沒有養貓。年輕一如永遠不掉下的貓
> 毛。
>
>
> 20001115,0127。給妳的。辛

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Re: 後來我也跟他們一樣,不再叫喚你的全名這是你給我的第二首詩呢07:05:08 11/20/00 Mon


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