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Subject: Re: 各位讀者


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Date Posted: 02:23:56 04/24/00 Mon
In reply to: KEN.DYLAN 's message, "Re: 這首詩只能給當事人看的嗎?[nt]" on 23:13:24 04/21/00 Fri

我當然想這首詩能對所有人而言都有足夠的樂趣,
但因為心力都不足,實在做不到。
節奏的轉折也不夠理想。
我自己喜歡第三、七、十句。第十句是後來才發現要寫的,
不過好像效果最好。

對於不知內情的讀者,間線的答案好像不夠準確和必然,
但對於知道的人而言,是會有另一種趣味。
所以安同學喜歡第二句,大概因為是那個答案太難handle。
這樣看起來過度顯眼的形式能得到安的青睬實在與有榮焉,
不過對於一個被迫要參與完全失去了神秘感的遊戲的超忙的人而言,
(又有安和s珠玉在前,實在無路可退了)
是一個必要的形式呢。


> > > > 〈答案早已被揭曉〉
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 現在再沒有東西圍困著我 __ __(名字)
> > > > 古老的字眼鑲死在詩詞裡不宜再挪動 __
> > > > 兩個名字之間為何要再有寄生的字一道長長樊籬 __
> > > > 終於沒有力氣覷開眼睛下一步就踩到死亡 __ __
> > > > 假如是夢,指著虛無空氣這個指稱才被考慮 __
> > > > 上述對象不知道欠單的存在所以永遠也不會 __
> > > > 有關痊癒的一再祈禱,我默唸默唸 __ __
> > > > 但接下來就真正無助閉嘴,太遠太遠了 __ __
> > > > 迫不得已但相對於那個字,我總是說 __ __
> > > > 讓我們再度唱歌去留下一個溫軟結尾問句曖昧淺灰 __

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