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Subject: 一首詩


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第一次在這裡貼詩的人
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Date Posted: 09:46:12 06/22/00 Thu

本人是中文人一名,但在這裡貼詩是第一次。本人是寫詩新手,希望各方好友多多給予批評或意見~~~

飛翔

飛翔在
看不到盡頭的
雲際
感覺
若浮若沉
心有時會跳
快得
喘不過氣
有時又會
婉靜
溫柔
地降落

六月的天空
時常下雨
我就在你的胸膛
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