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Subject: My Lovers Eyes


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Antoinette
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Date Posted: 15:55:42 07/27/03 Sun

Critique is welcome...

I catch a glimpse of my lovers eyes,
gazing at me,
as if to memorize.

Seeking, delving into my very soul,
his words carefully hidden,
they will not flow.

Hypnotically, I search, gaze,
trying to seek the feelings,
sorting out the maze.

In a glimpse of my lovers eyes,
I feel his need, his wanting;
but yet, my heart sighs.

Do I interpet correctly
what I think I see there?
Unspoken words, seemingly in the air.

Each day closer in heart,
body and soul, Giving to each other
a magical lovers glow.

Could It be? Am I wrongly reading?
The love I am so desperately
wanting, and needing.

A glimpse of my lovers eyes,
my heart rapidly beating,
my soul so deeply sighs.

That gaze so slowly,
going so deeply within me,
just for that moment I feel,

That, yes, he loves me!

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Re: My Lovers Eyesthe madpoet10:35:08 07/28/03 Mon


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