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Date Posted: 18:50:15 04/28/02 Sun
Author: Rakian
Subject: - Example -
In reply to: Rakian 's message, "- Permisson? -" on 18:30:05 04/28/02 Sun

- Rakian cocked his head to the side, and veered in a 360 degree angle, a full circle. He smirked, the glint reflecting off his lapis orbs, ocean'or'blue sways. Mascu stared down at pupils, clenching the ground with his claws, crouched down his body. Pressuring the abdominal, he pressed his stomach as it hit the ground, tail still and frozen. Lopes were plastered against cranium, and the wolf leapt into the air at his aware oppenent.
The other wolf took the blow, and swiped at Rakian's eyes, a yelp emerging from the victom's mouth. Retreating his head, but extending a paw to slash at the thoart, Rakian threw himself backward and tumbled over himself, landing roughly...but well in shape.
Tail erect, and head lowered at the eye level, both wolves circled, each awaiting the other's move. The other wolf was a golden brown, and slowly he made the move, going into a hurtle. Seeing the obvious blow, Rakian veered rightwards, managing to clasp onto the wolf's neck fur with his jaws. This now dragged his oppenent down, so that both wolves were laying on their sides...one grieving in pain, the other clutching on for the will of it.
After a moment of shock, golden brown fur was visible as a streak rammed into the right...knocking Rakian off. Falling down, but taking the pause to roll over and leap to his paws, both wolves were once more opposing each other...but then, the silver one lifted his head. Noblely, he bowed it, and shifted his paw to meet the ground in a regal form...both did this. Turning around to face the others, his students, Rakian nodded his head -
That...was a play fight. A good act of manuver, I say. It showed you both the Hurtle, the Jaw Clutch, and even the Backward Tumble. Of course, neither of us truely meant to hurt the other...so...you wouldn't normally give in to the shake that recided the Jaw Clutch...you must hold on for dear life.
- Smiling, the opposing wolf nodded -
This, was only a lesson...which, all of you will do soon enough. Got that? Good. I suggest practicing a backward flip, you'll each be tested on it...with me. Also, if you've been watching carefully...you'll notice that for every move he did, I did a defensive, then attack. Always do this, don't be an idiot and attack, afterwards defending with a weak appoarch...
- Bowing his head once more, a drop of sweat falling down onto the sandy bottoms, Rakian flexed his hunches and dismissed the group of wolves -

What'cha think? I normally don't do such a non-desc post...but...I'm sleep >.< If you don't like it, please give me another try at it...^_~

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'at was good -- OOTS, 20:36:55 04/28/02 Sun
- - Cheers - -- Rakian, 20:41:52 04/28/02 Sun