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Date Posted: 21:04:45 09/15/01 Sat
Author: Egyptian Night
Subject: Please Proof Read!

When Osiris Dreamed Isis,
And Ra Raised The Temples From The Sands,
Born In Ancient Eygpt,
The Most Mysterious Of Lands.

Her father was a King. He was a warrior by upbringing. One that would sacrifice his life for land and family. He was untameable and wild.
Her mother was Queen of this land. Born in the poorest of homes, she had nothing to live for. But she would not be put down by her status. A wild soul of fire.
They met by chance. The night was hot and her father was bored with the life of a prince. By chasing the stars, he ran from his home, never to return. On the banks of a river, he saw the mare that had haunted his days and nights. She stood there, staring into his eyes, holding his gaze in hers. As her father drew closer, so did she. They became friends that night. After that, her mother followed where he led, never leaving his side.
They found a land far from their old homes and gave them selves new name so as not to be recognised. Her father was called Egyptian Fate, for he had chosen his own. Her mother was Sun Heart.
They settled in this land and Egyptian Fate found new mares to join. Soon after, a son was born to them. He was raised to be like his father and to take over the land when Eygptian Fate had passed.
Years past and time went by. More sons were born to Sun Heart and Egyptian Fate, but no daughters. As more time passed, Egyptian Fate Came to be King of a great land. He defended agianst enemy and jackle.
Then one stormy night, a daughter came to them. In giving life to her only daughter, Sun Heart lost her own. The land greaved for many days. Be fore she died, she named her daughter Egyptian Night. For in Egypt, the night can be deadly.
As she grew, Egyptian Night became strong. She followed in the ways of her father more than any of her brothers. Soon she was helping to fight for her land and learn the ways of the warrior.
Three years went by and a threat came over the land. A king from far away wanted Egyptian Fate dead. No one knew why or for what reason, but the king of the other land prepared for war.
The brothers would fight with their father as would Egyptian Night. As the day drew to a close, the battle began.
Many were killed on both sides, but the king from far away was killed. But in this victory, Egyptian Fate and his oldest son were also killed. Egyptian Night had seen the deed done and she had killed the two who did it.
Now there was no reason for Egyptian Night to stay. She left her home to wonder the land. She said good bye to her brothers and walked away into the wild.
She travled for a months. In her travles, she fought more and had to kill one stallion that had tried to take her body. She was called "Foelslayer" by those that she passed on her way.
Now she has come to this land, hopeing for a home and an end to her travlings.
The soul inside is hidden, bureid in years of pain. Who can tame this wild one, born in the times of Gods?

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