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Subject: Poem 1


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Spin
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Date Posted: 14:33:03 05/21/02 Tue
In reply to: Spin 's message, "Ian Nottingham..." on 14:26:27 05/21/02 Tue

A/N: I must assure you I am no poet. To be honest I'm pretty bad at it but I came across a few scribblings in an old notebook. And this was way before I started to write fanfic. So..'Forewarned, forearmed'...let me know what you think!? =)

~*~

I taste your blood and mine
We are the same you and I
You won’t accept what has been shown to you
And you deny me what I long for
I profess to you my undying love
Yet, your scornful remark leaves me bleeding inside, slowly dying.
Each pain endured had no great affect then that callous word you used to describe me ‘Freak’
What hurts even more is the knowledge that what you say is true of your feelings for me
You know not the terrors that run through my mind; the abuse I still live through
The continued ache in my heart and the silent cry of my soul.

I have faced many enemies, gone into battle but never left unscathed
I braved the unknown where most men would flee
Yet, I cower under your scrutiny and cringe with every spoken word
I would gladly embrace physical retribution
To hopes run away from your animosity

I too am human; I have feelings
Those very feelings you chose to ignore
Those very same feelings that overwhelm me to protect my true mistress
Why do you disregard what the Witchblade longs to tell you?
I long, I live, and I love to serve you, Lady Sara
This is my true destiny, my fate
When you are ready to accept
I shall patiently wait in the shadows of darkness.

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Very nice!!! I always found poetry to be more difficult.....moondreamer15:57:28 05/22/02 Wed
Very Cool, Spin!Divamercury13:43:03 05/25/02 Sat
Very Good, Spin!!! (NT)Mystic17:28:29 06/07/02 Fri


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