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Subject: An Ian Poem


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LeliaGBAA
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Date Posted: 07:23:25 07/05/02 Fri
 Okay, Spin, you talked me into it. I'm posting my "Ian Poem" here in hopes that I'll receive a little more critique than on the WB board.

"Ian"

A man... am I?
Never touched
Never truly touching
Any....
Created being --
Human heart
Yet not.
Now at last touched
By a fierce, innocent,
Strong,
Vulnerable other...
I wonder.
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"Ian" I Like It!!mirage135512:20:36 07/05/02 Fri
Welcome Lelia...Spin02:29:59 07/07/02 Sun

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