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Sage Samui (SS)
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Date Posted: 22:04:33 04/06/02 Sat
In reply to:
Drake McClellan
's message, "My now detailed input" on 08:37:11 04/06/02 Sat
Clarification For all:
The points that you got at, and him having a ship. Well the ship part of course was knocked out, I kinda forgot about it, as I wrote the application twice because I forgot to put in a part for what his personal description was, it was much better then and much more clearer. Then with the idea of him being on the street at 5, come on now, kids like that can live on the street, homeless people! I see them all the time. And the reason why it was hard for him, is because he never actually expirenced death of a friend. I mean it would be hard for me even if I was put in that situation, as that was actually his true friend. Then to what you said about the shop situation, well in my first application, I had it that he was putting a fraud name so that he could continue to use it. And the speak of so many guns, the shop he has is a gun-shop, wchih Ace had...And you might say why didn't he have guns when he learned how to fight, well that part is because then it actually wasn't a gun-shop, it was only a store where you sold drugs....just a shelter of somewhat..maybe I should REWRITE it again...-_-"
But you know if I do, Im using a different picture?? And different type of style in somewhat fashion ya know...
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