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Date Posted: 10:58:59 04/18/02 Thu
Author: FemailLIZ
Subject: Re: ~~~**LOVE POEM**~~~
In reply to: deo 's message, "Re: ~~~**LOVE POEM**~~~" on 02:38:58 04/17/02 Wed

>soemtimes the world seems all too real
>and i just want the spinning to stop
>i want my broken heart to heal
>and not be everyone elses prop
>in all the ways i trust and care
>i get nothing good back
>i hurt and sob, the pain i bear
>with peace i have no luck
>i hope one day i'll look back at this
>and learn from where ive been
>that sometimes some things just is
>better kept unseen.
>
>
>and there you are, ta da!! an instant poem, no draft,
>that's how i work.


Well done!!! Tips: Aim to a point - follow my previous advice too - and make sure it makes sense.
I do it from my head without draft too!
Keep it up, mate - your doin fine!

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