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Date Posted: 23:31:26 11/03/02 Sun
Author: Z
Subject: Oh crap, I read this before the weekend and forgot to respond so here goes.....
In reply to: Sonali 's message, "CHAPTER 2 OF MY STILL UNTITLED BABY...." on 00:04:58 10/31/02 Thu

Okay, I like the story and I love the detail with which you describe the whole stage and stuff--it really helps me get a mental picture.
The point of view thing kinda threw me at first cuz if it's in first person that the reader wouldn't really know what was going on when the main character (you) weren't there, BUT as I kept reading, I found that it wasn't a hinderance in my reading, so it works!
Anyway, I just added that so I could thoroughly leave feedback, but as always I've only ended up babbling...the only thing you need to pay attention from this post is that I want you to POST MORE SOON! Got it? Good!
:)

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  • Wow...I just got caught up. This is great, you know it, so post more will ya? (NT) -- Tiffany, 15:47:03 11/11/02 Mon

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