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Date Posted: 16:26:24 12/28/02 Sat
Author: Holocaust, Massacre Genocide and Suicide.
Subject: [.the.four.plagues.]
In reply to: Elena 's message, "Re: Its' alright..." on 16:01:44 12/28/02 Sat

Holocaust let go, and backed away, watching the female intently.

"you did well, female. However short the mock-battle was. Be glad it was only a mock, and wasn't for your position."

He smirked, though he nodded, evaluating her.

"Your attack is good, but too many feints lets the others' know of your intent. Use less feints, and more actual attacks. Also, remember to lower yourself, and keep your eyes on them at all times. Watch for a ripple of muscle, or the flick of an ear, even. It could mean the difference between losing a battle and winning it."

He shook his head slightly, but kept watching her. She had potential, but needed to learn the ultimate moves to ensure the winning of a battle. He would teach her some, if she wanted, but she would have to ask. He would not offer.

Suicide barked, plume wagging. This Elena had potential, it was obvious.

Massacre watched the short-lived battle. He had expected such, she didn't seem like much of a fighter. She had the drive, but her tecnique was one of an inexperienced battler. He commended her silently with a nod, pleased that she had put up such a fight.

Genocide smirked, though said nothing, very uncharacteristic of her..Her remained as she was, neither scolding or commending the beta.

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Wait a Second here...>_< -- Giga (alpha female of the broken feather pack), 13:22:19 12/29/02 Sun
^watching^ -- Sierra, 09:13:50 12/30/02 Mon