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Subject: On a Downward Spiral into Maddness Part 1. (This should have gotten posted last night but I lost internet conection)


Author:
Thunder / Hatebreed / Redeem
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Date Posted: 10:13:21 12/06/01 Thu

The scene opens in CEO Redeems office where Hatebreed is standing over his desk.
Redeem is sitting back in his chair looking at the frustrated Hatebreed.

Hatebreed: Look, all this carp going on has nothing to do with you guys! I can’t stand everyone trying to get in my business! Now what happened with Honey is not my fault! I don’t know what’s been going on! Like I said before, she was in the wrong place at the wrong time! Now I have even more to worry about! Kali seems to not trust me or believe me! She wont even let me try to explain.

CEO Redeem looks at Hatebreed...

CEO Redeem: Can you blame her? Look what you have been doing! Look what you've become! It's not her fault! Now if I have to give you some time off, I'll do it, but you really need to think things through before Fury!

Hatebreed: See, thats what the fuck I'm talking about! You bastards can’t stay out of my business! I will solve this shit the way I know best! Now I don’t need time off but what all of you can do is stay the fuck out of my way! I don’t want to do something I'll regret!

CEO Redeem shakes his head in disgust...

CEO Redeem: It's too late, you already did something you'll regret!

Hatebreed steps forward closer to Redeem. Redeem begins to roll back in his chair getting ready to stand up. Just then the door is pushed open as Thunder walks into Hatebreed. Hatebreed turns to Thunder getting ready to attack. He then looks at Redeem and turns away in anger leaving the office. Thunder then turns to Redeem who looks pissed off....

Thunder: What the hell was that all about?

CEO Redeem: Man Hatebreed is really pissing me off.

Thunder: I can see that.

CEO Redeem: He’s changed dude…

Thunder: I know he’s trying to become the “Monster” again.

Redeem glares at Thunder.

CEO Redeem: This is different. He’s on a downward spiral to driving himself mad. If this keeps up he’s going to lose it completely and will be out of control.

Thunder notices the glare turn to a worried look. Suddenly Redeem rises from his chair and approaches Thunder. Redeem places his hand on Thunders shoulder and looks into his eyes....

CEO Redeem: Now both you and I know that Hatebreed needs to see the light before things get way out of control. We both know that there is only one man who can actually stand face to face with the monster and put him in his place!

A slight grin comes across Thunder’s face.

Thunder: I hear what you’re saying. You want me to talk, or should I say knock some sense into the big oaf.

Redeem gets a similar small but sadistic grin on his face.

CEO Redeem: Use what ever measures you deem necessary, just make him see the light.

Thunder: Consider it done bro.

Redeem and Thunder lock hands creating one large fist as a sign of unity. Thunder releases the hold and opens the door but turns back towards Redeem.

CEO Redeem: I’m counting on you buddy.

Thunder just smirks

Thunder: I haven’t let you down yet now have I.

CEO Redeem: Good point.

Thunder turns and exits Redeem’s office and heads down the hall. (FADE OUT) 10 minutes later, the scene shifts backstage as Hatebreed slowly makes his way down a dimly lit corridor. Suddenly a loud low laugh can be heard echoing through the hall. Hatebreed stops short and looks around, squinting to find the one responsible for the laughter. An angry look comes across the big mans face.

Hatebreed: Who’s there!

The laughter continues but then slowly trails off and nothing is heard but the heavy breathing from the angered Hatebreed.

Hatebreed: Damn it who’s there. Show yourself you coward!

As Hatebreed lets out a mighty growl a figure immerges from a dark corner and slowly draws closer to the camera’s and to Hatebreed. The figure steps out into a better lit portion of the hallway and he is revealed as Thunder. Thunder just scowls at Hatebreed.

Hatebreed: Do you have a death wish or something? I asked to be left alone, so why are you here.?

Thunder continues to glare at Hatebreed with a cold stare.

Thunder: Big man I’m here because you’re falling off the deep end, and Redeem wants me to straighten you out.


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[> Subject: On a Downward Spiral into Maddness Part 2.


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Thunder / Hatebreed
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Date Posted: 10:19:05 12/06/01 Thu

Hatebreed: What the fuck are you talking about? I can straighten myself out! I certainly dont need help from a scrawny piece of shit like you! Now do the right thing and get the fuck out of my face! I respect you Thunder and I don’t want to do something I might feel sorry for later on! Now please just leave! I have to be alone for a while!

Hatebreed begins walking away from Thunder punching a brick wall. Thunder begins to follow Hatebreed but looks at the wall, which looks to be missing a chunk from Hatebreed's fist. Thunder shakes his head and gets another sadistic grin as he
continues to follow Hatebreed. Thunder catches up to him and grabs his arm pulling him around. Hatebreed then turns around and grabs Thunder by his shirt and begins yelling in his face...

Hatebreed: Look you little bastard! I'm not going to tell you again! Now stay the hell out of my business!

Hatebreed shoves Thunder back and begins to walk away again. Thunder just shakes his head again and begins to follow after the big man. Eventually he catches up to him and again grabs his arm pulling him around. This time he wheels around and decks Thunder with a solid right hand that sends Thunder to the concrete floor.

Hatebreed: I warned you! I warned you to leave me the fuck alone, but did you listen? NO! You brought that upon yourself.

Thunder jumps to his feet and glares at Hatebreed with a cold stare.

Thunder: Big Man it’s you who brought this upon yourself.

Thunder suddenly charges Hatebreed and wraps his arms around his waste, and drives him back hard against the wall. Thunder begins laying in heavy left and right combinations to Hatebreed’s midsection. Hatebreed doubles over, and is quickly met by a crushing uppercut that completely levels him, from Thunder. Thunder slowly stalks over to the fallen Hatebreed, and bends to pick him up. Hatebreed suddenly grabs Thunder by the throat and gets back to his feet. He lets out a mighty growl and heaves Thunder halfway across the hall slamming him into the opposite wall. Thunder hits hard and falls to the floor. The big man lets out a low growl as he slowly approaches Thunder. Hatebreed stands next to Thunder and stares down at him.

Hatebreed: You don’t listen very well do you little man. I suggest you stay down, and leave me ALONE!

Hatebreed turns to walk away, but Thunder suddenly sweeps Hatebreed’s legs out from under him, and quickly stands back up with a fiery look of rage in his eyes, and an evil smile on his face.

Thunder: You weren’t thinking of leaving were you. I’m just getting warmed up. Redeem told me to straighten you out, and I fully intend to, or I’ll die trying!

Hatebreed gets up on his hands and knees, and starts to rise, but Thunder delivers a swift kick to his gut knocking the wind out of him. Hatebreed struggles to regain his breath, as well as get back to his feet. Thunder stands by poised for an attack as the big man regains his breath and gets to a vertical base. Hatebreed turns quickly and glares at Thunder with the same fiery rage in his eyes. He lets out a mighty growl that echoes through the hall, and charges Thunder. Thunder lowers his head and sends Hatebreed over with a back body drop. Hatebreed quickly gets to his feet and charges again, this time he grabs Thunder by the throat and hoists him high off the ground choking the life out of him. Thunder grabs hold of the big mans hands and lets out a battle cry from hell, and starts prying his hands off of his throat. After a minute he succeeds and falls to the floor. Hatebreed goes to pick him up but is met by a low blow that doubles him over, followed by a knee to the gut. Hatebreed slowly starts to rise, and Thunder quickly looks then puts Hatebreed up onto his shoulders and drives him through a table with The Storm Front. Thunder stands over the fallen Hatebreed breathing very heavily.

Thunder: Now to snap some sense into you.

Thunder walks off camera and comes back with a long length of chain, and a weird looking chair. Thunder places the chair on the ground, and then drives four wedges into the floor locking the chair in place. HE then drags the big man over, and places him on the chair, and wraps the chain around him and the chair and fastens it with a heavy padlock. Thunder then begins smacking Hatebreed to wake him up. The big man stirs and looks at Thunder with hatred in his eyes he tries to stand and grab him, but looks down to see he is chained to the chair. He lets out another mighty growl.

Hatebreed: What the Fuck are you up to! When I get out of these chains I’ll KILL YOU!

Thunder just smirks, and lets out a low chuckle

Thunder: When…. It’s more like If you get out. Now I’m going to talk, and your going to listen are we clear.

Hatebreed growls again, looks up at Thunder and then nods in agreement.

Thunder: Good. Look your spiraling out of control dude. And it’s all because of you and Kali.

Hatebreed: What do you mean because of me and Kali?

Thunder: I mean that ever since she has stepped foot into the fed you’ve been walking around awestruck fantasizing about her…

Hatebreed: What does that have to do with me spiraling out of control?

Thunder delivers a strong back hand to Hatebreed’s face turning it to the right. Hatebreed quickly snaps back and glares at Thunder.

Thunder: Don’t interrupt me. Now it’s plainly obvious that you care for her, and it’s also obvious that she really likes you too..

Hatebreed: How would you know that?

Again Thunder lays another back hand across Hatebreed’s face.

Thunder: That’s for being thick headed. Can’t you see that she like you. Can’t you see that whenever she was around you she was a different person? No I bet you couldn’t. You were too busy hiding your feelings and hiding yourself from her to realize that. Everyone in the Corporation, Redeem, me, your best friend Outkast, Maniac we were all rooting for you to hook up with her, but you were too stubborn and thick headed to do anything about it. Outkast even set you up one day and you confessed your feelings towards her on camera, but you didn’t want her to see the tape so he destroyed it. Then Draven came along.

Hetebreed’s eyes fill with confusion and rage when his name is mentioned.

Then he started getting friendly with Kali, and you took it that she was more attracted to him, then you. And you completely snapped when you heard her say he was sexy and that completely tore you apart. You turned away from her and tried to become the monster that you once were, while trying to block out your feelings of her completely, yet you still come to her like a little lost puppy at her beckoned call, and it’s driving you insane. Yet no matter how many times she’s said she likes Draven as a friend, but she cares for you, you refused to accept it. You kept on believing that you are not worthy of her affection. Now what the fuck is up with that?

Hatebreed lowers his head and begins to speak softly.

Hatebreed: You wouldn’t understand…

Thunder’s eyes narrow with anger at this comment and he lays several backhands across Hatebreed’s face.

Thunder: The why would I be here trying to talk some sense into you, you fucking numb headed bastard? Because I’m Redeem’s hired gun? Because I’m one of the very few who can match your power? Dude, he asked me, because he knew that I went through the same thing you are going through right now. I know what it’s like spiraling out of control, not being able to control your own actions, not being able to tell someone how you really feel about them.

Hatebreed looks up at Thunder.

Hatebreed: You still don’t know what it’s like for me no one does, and no one ever will.

Thunder: It doesn’t fucking matter. Kali admitted she likes you, she even admitted that she thinks she loves you, but now with this so called rebirth happening, she’s scared to be around you. She loved the old you, not the new out of control monster you’ve become. Get your head on straight man, and go tell her how you really feel about her.

Hatebreed looks up at Thunder with a confused almost solace look on his face. Thunder turns and starts to walk away. Hatebreed starts to speak with a very shaky voice.

Hatebreed: She…She really said she loved me?

Thunder stops in his tracks and turns to him.

Thunder: She said she was in love with the man you use to be, not the man you’ve become. You think about that, for a while and I’ll be back to unhook you.

Thunder turns and begins walking again rounding a corner and disappearing. Hatebreed lowers his head. A single tear appears and runs down his mask. He then throws his head back and begins shouting.

Hatebreed: Oh God! What have I done!

Hatebreed lets out a mighty roar that once again echoes through the hall. Suddenly he starts struggling, and in an instant the chain stretches and one of the links snaps in half. The chain falls to the floor, Hatebreed gets to his feet and quickly disappears down another dark hall. Thunder comes rushing back to where the now empty chair rests. He looks to see the broken chain on the floor and lets out a low laugh and cracks a smile as he turns and walks off. Scene fades out.


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