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"Optical Illusion" hey guys i want some feedback

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Andrew Fent

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Date Posted: 15:55:51 02/10/03 Mon

hi guys, i wrote a screen play and im itchin for some feedback.

its about a young black girl in 1950s America who wishes upon a shooting star to have white skin. and it comes true, to all the white people she is now a young white girl , and heres the twist all the black people still see her as black.

thus the title "optical illusion".

i havent thought of a real plot yet, tho the potential, im sure you will agree is there.

im thinking the character may either become a world renowned popular singer, or a criminal who gets away with things because she in theory has two heads depending on what colour skin the person has who is looking at them... hmm shit, i just realised theres other skin colours than black and white. back to the drawing board. sorry for wasting you time.

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Re: "Optical Illusion" hey guys i want some feedback	mister uncle	07:52:10 02/11/03 Tue