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Date Posted: 21:39:46 07/15/02 Mon
Author: husky
Subject: Re: goodmorning sweets
In reply to: Porthos 's message, "goodmorning sweets" on 21:14:27 07/15/02 Mon

love it. the ending is just amazingly strong and powerful and just all around wonderful. i've never felt anything so angry. the flow takes the reader from pain, to the joy of cotton candy and youth, right back into a powerful release at the end. absolutely grand, and i wouldn't dare admonish you on the word choice at the end - it is appropriate and kind of delightful, in a devilish way. powerful, beautiful, made me quite happy.

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